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personal startpage - english wording

posted 2009/07/16 17:35    Visibility: World


I just clean up a bit trac.

from  bentivoglia

The introductory text on the main page ("this is your personal startpage...", etc) strikes me as very 'un-English'. I won't propose improvements as I am not a native speaker myself, but I'd strongly suggest having it proofed by someone who is.

BW Rox version: user agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.1; en-US; rv:1.9.0.8) Gecko/2009032609 Firefox/3.0.8 request uri: http://www.bewelcome.org/main

 

Maybe one of the English natives ask him what he means ....?!?

 

posted 2009/07/16 21:30    Visibility: World


I get that feeling too.

First, add a space: Start page

 Your own start page?

posted 2009/07/16 21:30    Visibility: World


Got it! "Your own personal start page"